Start with What They Do, Then Let the World Follow

Do

Show the character doing something only someone in this world would do.

Avoid

Pausing the story to explain how the world works.

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Let Objects Carry History

Do

Make your character interact with objects in ways that reveal their function and significance.

Avoid

Describing objects without letting the character use them.

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Use Discomfort to Reveal What’s Changed

Do

Let physical sensations (fear, nausea, exhaustion) reveal environmental threats.

Avoid

Telling readers why something is dangerous before showing the character’s reaction.

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Show Social Rules Through Violation

Do

Use reactions from other characters to show the weight of the rule.

Avoid

Explaining the rule before anyone breaks it.

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Let Movement Reveal Geography and Danger

Do

Let physical obstacles and choices reveal the layout and logic of your world.

Avoid

Stopping to describe the environment before the character interacts with it.

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Worldbuild Through Ritual and Routine

Do

Show your character performing the ritual without over-explaining its purpose.

Avoid

Front-loading the meaning before the action happens.

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Final Thoughts

Extras